Wednesday, December 31, 2025

Death Note 2

 

I never belonged

In your world,

So I seek

Another.

 

I've seen what

I needed to see,

Said what

I needed to say,

 

Except...                                     (I'm sorry)

 

It's my turn

To be selfish,

To leave without

Saying goodbye.

 

Let my fellow

Wanderers

Comfort you,

Too late.

 

 

© 2025 Edward P. Morgan III


2 comments:

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    Notes and asides:
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    Although I had started it before, I finished this during Kitten*Con this year, primarily while watching the movie What Dreams May come. That might explain something.

    When I read it aloud, the parenthetical is said at a whisper accompanied by a slow shake of my head. Make of that what you will. You'd probably have to hear, though I doubt you ever will.

    I place the same caveat on this poem as I did on the original Death Note poem. It is playing with an idea, not an intention. Though in my personal philosophy, everyone has a right to checkout early. I believe Vermont and the Netherlands agree, at least to some extent.

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  2. I built this image from a picture of a “scroll” tied with a ribbon. The seal may look familiar to those who looked closely at the image for the original Death Note poem. I started with the same skull image, warped it to fit the scroll, rather than the drop of ink. The scroll is mapped with a parchment paper image and shadowed to give it dimension. The desktop and background may also look familiar. I lifted those directly from the original Death Note image to give even more continuity to the poems.

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