Lou coughed as he struggled
to breathe, his body wracked by pain. The molten air scorched his
lungs like the backdraft from a furnace. His wings smelled like a scalded dove.
His flight feathers had first curled and smoked during the descent then been
seared away leaving only the blackened leather that lurked beneath.
He crawled to the edge of a suppurating
pool, his legs trailing twisted and broken behind him. His once pristine pale
skin reddened, inflamed by the inferno of the wasteland. How many of his
companions had survived?
Their shattered bodies fell toward
the barren landscape as fiery meteors against an iron sky, their screams of
agony echoing across the jagged outcrops of the rocky terrain. A land of
perpetual twilight. Red sky in the morning.
He knew he should gather up
the survivors, rally his troops in case the enemy pursued. He should regroup
them for a counterattack. Once more into the breach. That’s what a leader did.
He had neither the heart nor
energy. He’d led his forces into carnage, a complete and utter disaster.
Outnumbered, they’d held their own throughout the palace coup, until the old
man had waded in. They’d still rallied to his banner and now he’d led them into
the worst kind of exile. It no longer mattered whether their cause was just.
Lou stared into the muddy
pool, its surface pockmarked with slowly ballooning bubbles of brimstone that
burst into the yellow stench of something rotten. He’d rolled the bones and
lost. He surveyed the cost of his arrogance littering the stony landscape. He
couldn’t face them again, his comrades and lieutenants.
He clawed himself headfirst
into the fetid pool. His skin erupted as each inch passed beyond that
gray-brown border, tracing the outline of his progress with a ring of fire that
burned his resolve away. The boiling mud seared but soothed his tattered flesh.
The worst of his wounds withered and maturated, angrily hissing as they
embraced the scathing bath. In another rejection, he found himself adrift on
the surface like dross cast into molten lead.
He rolled onto his back and
hung motionless as if floating in a forge, his neck bitten by the tiny teeth of
the jagged edge that increasingly secured him to the land of living as all his
impurities boiled away. His limbs felt leaden, drawn like anchors to a
bottomless sea of anguish. Fiery fangs raked along his skull as he allowed his head
to slip beneath the murky surface. This time it would not rise on its own.
Blackness the color of his ravaged heart closed close and finally claimed him.
And with it, he achieved a measure of the freedom he’d desired all along.
---
Lou awoke to strong hands
grasped beneath his arms. Trails of agony traced along his back and folded
wings as he was dragged from his turbid den.
“Don’t worry, Lou. I’ve got
you.” He knew that voice. Bebe. It would have to be. “Good thing I spotted you
when I did.”
Lou coughed up chunks of quickened
mud that tasted like clods of smoked sulfur. His head pounded in the
unrelenting heat. Like the resonating tattoo that had marshaled his forces to
war then ushered in their defeat.
“Bebe?” he croaked. “I was
almost free.”
“We are free, now, Lou.” Bebe
seemed to misunderstand. “We’re all free, just like you promised.”
Bebe dragged Lou away from
the solace of the scalding pool and laid his head on an unforgiving pillow of a
stone. Lou pried his eyes open. No sun. No stars. Just an eternal smoky
gloaming. As if a reminder that they’d started an insurrection that would never
end.
“You shouldn’t have followed.”
Where once Lou’s voice sang as clear as a dulcet chime, it now grated inside
his head. Arduously, he rolled over and tried crawling back to the stinking
sanctuary of the pool. “Grant me peace.”
“Snap out of it, Lou.” Bebe’s
massive hands shook him like a tectonic shift that unleashed an earthquake. Bebe’s
face suddenly filled his view. His skin was charred and denuded like pale,
supple calfskin that had been boiled into a mask of hardened leather. “The lads
still need you. I need you.”
The bones of Bebe’s skull
protruded at odd angles. Cancerous growths bulged behind his ears. Lou wondered
if he looked the same. The old man’s final curse as they fell away toward
darkness? “How many?” was all he could think to ask.
“Most of us. Ty’s dragging in
everyone he can find.” Bebe cradled him in hug, then gently laid him back on
the ledge of rock. “Rest, Lou. A little sleep and you’ll remember your old
self.”
That was the problem, Lou
thought as his eyelids, like the gates to an ancient fortress, slowly ground
shut.
---
“Come on, Lou,” Bebe cajoled
for the umpteenth time. “It’s not such a bad place. A little TLC and we’ll call
it home.”
Lou was up and about again, bouncing like a jackdaw on his damaged legs. Soaking them in the brimstone bath seemed to help them heal though the bones remained twisted.
Lou was up and about again, bouncing like a jackdaw on his damaged legs. Soaking them in the brimstone bath seemed to help them heal though the bones remained twisted.
“We had homes in a
crystalline palace, and now we live in this?” Lou swept his arm across the
shattered landscape.
“Like you told us when we
started, better free down here than as hired help up there.” Bebe settled his
bulk into the crook of a boulder. “We’ll rebuild the empire, on our own terms
this time, just like you said.”
“Yeah, just like I said.” Lou plucked up a small, flat stone and whipped it across the surface of the viscous pool. At first contact it stuck and sank beneath the mud without a trace. “That was then, Bebe. Look around you. This place is a pit. A cesspool in a wilderness of stone.”
“Yeah, just like I said.” Lou plucked up a small, flat stone and whipped it across the surface of the viscous pool. At first contact it stuck and sank beneath the mud without a trace. “That was then, Bebe. Look around you. This place is a pit. A cesspool in a wilderness of stone.”
“I admit it’s a bit of a
fixer-upper.” Bebe scooped up a handful of gravel and let it trickle through
his fingers. “But a few more bodies and we can make into something special.
We’ve got the raw materials.”
“And where will we dig up labor?” Lou asked, surveying the blasted terrain skeptically, seeking the tiniest gemstone hidden amongst the scree.
“And where will we dig up labor?” Lou asked, surveying the blasted terrain skeptically, seeking the tiniest gemstone hidden amongst the scree.
Bebe stood and dusted off his
hands. “Let’s start with what we’ve got. The lads are just waiting for you to
tell them what to do.”
Lou shook his head ruefully. “We
didn’t rebel just to setup a new dictatorship.”
“Lou, we still need leaders,”
Bebe whispered gently. “They naturally look to you.”
Ty and a few others had
congregated at the edge of their conversation, a thin and haggard cadre leaning
heavily on one another’s shoulders. They all eyed him in sidelong shock. Could
he refuse them after all they’d sacrificed? For such a big lout, Bebe could be
as perceptive as he was fierce.
Lou sighed deeply then
allowed his vision to reset. His mind began churning with tactics. They needed
somewhere they could rest and recuperate, somewhere the most deeply wounded could
heal. But first, they needed to consolidate their position. That meant
defenses. He may have stolen the best and brightest the old man had but the
other side still outnumbered them two to one. If they wanted to survive, they’d
have to set up for the long haul.
“See that ridge at the top of
the pit?” Lou pointed. “Let’s use that as our natural line of defense. Ty, I
want you to organize the work crews. Start building a redoubt with parapets.
Eventually, we’ll put a gate between those two low, rocky outcroppings. I want
watches from this moment forward. Bebe,” he turned to his chief lieutenant and
adviser, “Pick two flights from the most able-bodied. Gather up any other wounded
and bring them here. Then, I want you to start building a bathhouse. That pool has
healing properties. That’s where we’ll build our citadel.”
The other shuffled their feet
for a moment, wan smiles spreading contagiously. This was more like the Lou
they’d known and followed. “Don’t just stand there folding your wings,” Lou
added. “Let’s get to it.”
His words set off a flurry of
activity.
---
“We’ve got our first convert.”
Bebe grinned as he lumbered along the path that descended from the rim. “The
old man created a pair of lesser creatures and the woman refused to bend her
knee.”
“Sounds like a girl after my
own heart,” Lou replied as he watched the work gangs erecting his defenses. A
broken wall crept around the enormity of the central pit, exploiting the
terrain to its advantage. Below, the bathhouse had begun to take shape at the
edge of the brimstone pool. Nearby, barracks were being raised as temporary
housing. “So what will he do now?”
Bebe stood before him,
towering yet never looming. “He’s already molded another from pieces of the man.
This one has a weaker will. I think we can exploit that.”
“And the original?” Lou
turned to face him.
“That’s the best part.” Bebe
beamed, his hands clasped before him like a child. “She’s here. She wants to
join our cause.”
Lou scowled suspiciously. “You
don’t think she’s a spy?”
“If she is, she’s a damned
good one,” Bebe said, his face an open banner as always. “She gets along
rousingly with the lads. They all think she’s a keeper. Ty trusts her and he’s
suspicious of the dragon. If we’re going to make a go of this, we’ll need new
blood.”
Lou’s scowl deepened. Bebe
had a point, but he didn’t like it. The old man wasn’t usually cunning but Lou
couldn’t help but smell a trap. “I want to talk to her before we make a
decision. Maybe we can learn what the old man’s up to. I’m sure he hasn’t forgotten
about us.”
Bebe’s smile broadened. “I’ll
send her right down.”
---
“I can’t believe he left his
creation unguarded,” Lou said, scraping off the last of the scales from his
disguise. The yellow mist that filled the bath house swirled away from his
mouth with each syllable. “Lil’s recon information was invaluable. The garden
was laid out exactly like she said, down to the last tree.”
“You didn’t bring the new one
back?” Bebe asked peering over Lou’s shoulder.
Lou peeled back his eye caps
and flicked them away before he descended the steps into the simmering mud. “I
did something better. I sowed the seeds of doubt. I told you, this is long-game
scenario. Any word from our recon squad?”
“They got back a little while
ago.” Bebe settled on a stonework window seat looking out on the rising city,
gap-toothed but growing to fill the space beyond. Quarrying had leveled and
terraced much of the jagged landscape into a series of descending tiers that
ended here. “Bad news. The old man closed the back entrance. He’s stationed a
pair of guards armed with those nasty flaming swords.”
“Well, we knew this would be
a one-shot anyway.” Lou settled deeper into the mud, luxuriating as he allowed
the heat to penetrate his bones. The old man’s creation was so cold by
comparison now, like a different world. “At least we’ve tied down a couple of
his elites. Speaking of which, how’s the wall coming?”
“We’ve got a nearly unbroken
curtain all the way around the upper level.” Bebe’s gaze shifted to the
construction along the rim of the pit. “It needs a lot of improvements. Ty’s
laid footings for the watchtowers and the ramparts but he needs more manpower
to get it all done.”
“Have you solved the problem
of the gatehouse?” Lou transferred to the steaming water bath, allowing the
effervescent bubbles to scrub the grit away from his skin.
Bebe smiled demonically. “I
think so. See that outcropping of red rocks up on the seventh tier?” He
pointed. Lou craned his head to see out the window and nodded. “Turns out they’re
rich with iron. Tightly bound, but we set up the dragon as a furnace.”
“Clever. At least that gives
her something to do. Ty will be appreciative.” Lou began backstroking around
the pool with his wings. After a couple quick circuits, he settled onto one of
the built-in seats lining the shallows.
“So what next, boss?” Bebe
asked, turning his gaze back toward his friend.
“Keep chipping away at the improvements
on the outer wall.” Lou emerged refreshed, his skin reddened but glistening.
Water dripped from the points of his bat-like wings. He didn’t bother with a
robe or towel. A minute outside and he’d be dry. “If this plan pans out, we
should start picking up more of the old man’s strays soon. Those pricks on the
other side are still elitist.”
---
“He did what?!” Lou spat,
incredulous. “How many of them?”
Around the hall, the others
kept their gazes down. Only Bebe looked him in the eye. “All of them, except
one family floating around in an ark. The place is completely underwater.”
“Petulant, isn’t he?” Lou scowled. What was the old man’s game this time? He
waved the others away so he could consult with Bebe alone. They quickly scuttled
from the hall. Lou wandered over to one of the arched windows looking out on his
city. No, their city, he corrected. He led only because they insisted, and
because he knew how the old man thought. Though the others had grown
increasingly fearful of his fiery temper. Only Bebe seemed unafraid to speak his
mind. Which was why Lou relied on him.
“He must have caught wind of how many we’d gathered,” Bebe continued. “A few more generations and we’d outnumber them.”
Lou swung around with a sneer.
“And he still thinks he can just dump the truly evil ones on us? What are we
doing with them, anyway.”
“Ty put them to work on the interior.” Bebe sauntered over to the long table and began picking through the remains of the aborted meal. The offerings were plain but plentiful. A lot of meat.
“Nothing strategic, I hope?” Lou’s gaze snapped back outside, peering suspiciously at the work gangs.
“Ty put them to work on the interior.” Bebe sauntered over to the long table and began picking through the remains of the aborted meal. The offerings were plain but plentiful. A lot of meat.
“Nothing strategic, I hope?” Lou’s gaze snapped back outside, peering suspiciously at the work gangs.
“Nah, just more housing.”
Bebe took a swig from an abandoned wine goblet. He let the liquid settle on his
tongue a moment before deciding it was worth keeping. “The place is filling up.
And they do decent work when properly motivated. Only a hard-core few need
constant supervision. Most have become true converts.”
“Keep anyone in the least bit
suspicious away from the outer wall, and the citadel,” Lou returned his gaze to
the dim, torch-lit hall. “I don’t want any built-in design failures if the old
man attacks.”
“Seems unlikely.” Bebe claimed
a seat on one of the benches, setting his goblet before him as he began piling
a plate with leftovers that he speared with a two-tined fork. “He’s content
using his creation as a proxy battlefield. Less to lose that way, I guess. We
still have a manpower shortage though. Ty has a plan for hot and cold running
water but says there’s not a soul to spare.”
Lou wandered back to join
him, scooping up an abandoned goblet from the table. Wine mixed with anger
helped him think. He regarded the goblet’s shimmering iridescence in the fire
from the perpetual false dawn beyond the windows. If nothing else, their exile
had produced exquisite glass. “In a few generations, we’ll start with the
Chinese. They’re doomed anyway but they like to keep their hands busy. And Lil
says they’ll be like a billion of them one day.” He settled in the chair at the
head of the table, one leg dangling over an arm. “Until then, Ty will just have
to make do.”
---
“More bad news, boss.” Bebe stood
in the doorway of Lou’s apartments. The big guy sounded winded after ascending
the tower. With so many unwinged converts, they’d had to build in stairs. Or
had his lieutenant put on a little weight?
“What this time?” Lou asked, wrapping
himself in a robe as he motioned Bebe to help himself to the platters of delicacies
laid out on the sideboard. “Did the old man turn another of our operatives into
salt?”
“No. This time he’s unleashed
a plague.” As usual, Bebe went straight for the carafe then loaded up a pewter plate.
“Seven of them, actually.”
Lou smiled sardonically. “And
his chosen still think they’re better off with him?”
“He didn’t stop there.” Bebe
licked his fingers after each morsel he sampled. “Remember how we moved into
their homeland after all his people evacuated?”
“Yeah, we really turned that
place around.” Lou poured himself some wine and drifted toward the balcony. “Everyone
was happy last I heard. The local market was overflowing with milk and honey.
We could barely offload the stuff. But at least we could trade it for some decent
food.”
Bebe followed him outside,
plate and goblet in hand. “Seems the old man wants it back. He’s issued an
order: No stone standing; no soul spared.” He set his overflowing plate on the wide,
stone railing.
Lou leaned his elbows on the
rail and looked out from his high tower. Below, a city now flourished. A city
perpetually under construction it seemed. An unfinished dream beneath an iron sky.
Ty had had a devil of a time finding laborers whose loyalty was beyond question
to reinforce the walls. In the end Lou had told him the citadel took
precedence.
“The old man sure knows how
to win over hearts and minds, doesn’t he?” Lou adjusted his robe, a marvelously
soft cotton-linen blend, and turned back to Bebe. “Please tell me that’s all of
it.”
Bebe shook his head, his hand
just descending from popping another handful of sweetmeats into his mouth.
Lou sighed. “Let’s hear the
rest of it.”
“We’ve had a major setback on
the Chinese front,” Bebe said around a mouthful of food.
Lou rolled his eyes. “What
now?”
“Seems we’ve had a defection.’
Bebe washed down his impromptu meal with a deep swig from his goblet. “The
Buddhists now have their own pet demon. One of Lil’s brood.”
Lou hung his head. Would the bad
news never end? “How much did he know?”
“Not much, but enough that we’ve
had to shut down some major new initiatives.” Bebe wiped one hand on his leg,
the other never relinquishing his wine goblet. “Recruiting is way down. Seems
the Buddhists are setting up a parallel operation, only nothing there gets
done. They just sit staring at their navels for eternity. Thing is, nobody on
the other side cares about them. The old man only turned Mal to hurt us.”
“Tell me there’s some good
news.” Lou turned back to the rim. The fortifications surrounding it were
nearly complete. A shadowed city squatted within the bulwark of its walls,
secure with one notable exception.
Bebe followed his gaze and
smiled. “We’ve finally got enough iron to forge the gate. Ty thinks we should
be able to raise it soon. It’ll be much stronger than that Lebanese cedar.”
Lou surveyed his domain
wistfully. “At least then they won’t be able to evict us again.” But he still
worried anyway.
---
Lou and Bebe toured the
completed fortifications. The iron gate had been raised. Its maw stood open for
Lou to inspect. The last vulnerability in their defenses was now sealed. Not
that the other side had shown much inclination to break the armistice. But Lou
knew better than taking anything for granted where the old man was concerned.
Of late, his mind had grown as erratic and inscrutable as a Cretan maze.
“What’s it say above the
archway?” Lou asked, pointing to the large, engraved letters facing the
causeway where a besieging army might read it. The steam- and treadmill-powered
pulleys that had raised the massive blocks for the guard towers now drained the
miasma from the pit, channeling it back toward the river which had spilled
forth and claimed the swampy plain.
“It’s Italian,” Bebe answered with a shrug. “It keeps the riffraff out.” A shanty-town of the outcasts had arisen between the river and the gate. Loyal guards armed with tridents kept the gawkers at bay. Both sides swatted at hosts of unseen midges.
Lou and Bebe passed back into
the city. An iron portcullis ratcheted into place behind them, its spiky teeth
sinking deep within the causeway stone.
For the first time in as long
as Lou could remember, Bebe didn’t have a goblet in his hand. His hulking lieutenant
looked almost professional in a rough and tumble way. As they emerged from the
dark tunnel into the twilight of the cobblestone courtyard, Lou asked quietly, “So
what’s this news that has you so shaken that you insisted we tour the outer
walls?”
Bebe glanced at him askance
and sighed. He knew he was too easily read. “It looks like the old man’s
decided to settle this in one throw. He’s pulled an avatar gambit.”
Lou stared at him, eyes wide
and mouth agape. “And after all the chaos he’s wreaked on his chosen, this helps
his position how?” It took him a second to remember to keep walking.
“He says it’s all or nothing,”
Bebe answered, slowing to admire the central fountain, allowing his friend to
catch up. “Serve him or join us here.”
“Is he crazed?” Lou
whispered. “We’ll be swamped. Or maybe that’s the point.” His eyes narrowed as
he performed the mental calculus of playing out the old man’s new strategy.
Bebe shrugged. “His chosen
seem to thrive on the abuse. Whatever doesn’t kill them…”
Lou’s expression hardened as
he came to a decision. “How about you and the lads go have little talk with
this boy of his. Maybe we can come to terms.”
---
Lou found Bebe back at the
fountain, muttering angrily to himself as he repeatedly sluiced water over his
leathern skin. He hadn’t seen his lieutenant so enraged since the war.
“Ty told me you were back.”
Lou approached cautiously. “I take it the negotiations didn’t end well.”
“Me and the lads tried to
talk some sense into the boy but he cast us into a pig. A pig!” Bebe roared,
scrubbing his skin all the harder. “Now we’re all banished. Banished! For a
thousand of their years.”
“He’s definitely his father’s
son.” Lou shook his head, laying a gentle hand on his friend’s shoulder. “Maybe
I should make an appearance and talk with him myself.”
Bebe glared back at him. “You
could spend a month in that blighted place talking to the boy and he still
wouldn’t listen to reason. What ever happened to the spirit of youthful
rebelliousness?”
A joke? Lou let relief escape
him as a laugh. “I bet Mike and Gabe each sit on a shoulder whispering constant
lies. We always knew we could never trust those two.”
“Or Raphie,” Bebe didn’t
quite smile but turned his anger toward a safer target. “That bastard always thought he was good enough to be one of us. Ha!”
“I think it’s time I see the
place again myself. If not the boy, I’m sure at least one of his fanatics will
be open to our ideas. Don’t worry, Bebe.” Lou clapped his behemoth of a friend
on the shoulder. “One way or another, I’ll abort this little revolution. Time
is on our side.”
---
“I told you the old man
overreached when he changed the rules to benefit his son,” Lou said to his
friend as they strolled the newly installed rock garden in a walled courtyard
behind the great hall of their citadel. “Even now, he can’t grasp that he let
victory slip through his fingers as soon as he clenched his iron fist.”
Boulders seemed to float within
a rippled sea of raked gravel like the exposed face, belly and toes of a
partially submerged giant, the subtle shades of each rock interplaying with the
fiery colors splashed across the sky. Lou ambled toward the stone pagoda
looking back toward the central hall across a long reflecting pool now stocked
with glittering fish. He thought he could get used to this new esthetic. He
found it calming and peaceful.
“With all the people they’ve
sent since their change in strategy,” Bebe observed, a wine goblet once again
ensconced in a hand, “at least we’ve overcome our manpower shortage. Ty’s
having a devil of a time coming up with projects to keep them all busy. I think
he’s about to have them start carving individual faces into the cobblestones
next. At least they seem content.”
“What is that?” Lou pointed to
a white marble chair perched on a dais beneath the pagoda, cryptic runes carved
all along its sides. “It looks suspiciously like a throne.”
“Impressive isn’t it?” Bebe admired
it as he took another sip of wine. “Ty designed it for the anniversary of our
arrival. Lil carved each of the sigils herself.”
Lou scowled. “It looks like a
seat of judgment. Tear it down and ship it to the old man,” he instructed. “We
have no divine right here.” He turned onto a different path, one he hoped might
end at the new bath house.
“Are you sure?” Bebe raised
an eyebrow as he followed. “The children he condemns are impressionable. A
little fear makes them talk.”
Lou didn’t answer, just folded
his arms, tucking his hands in the opposing sleeves of his silken robe. Bebe wore
red embroidered with dragons. His was black with a golden kyrin. “Any other
news?”
“His followers fight each
other now. They’ve started an Inquisition, as bloody as their crusades. They
even argue against their sainted ones with a lawyer named for you.” Bebe smiled
slyly as he sipped his wine. “Turning his boy’s chief disciple must have
spooked the old man pretty good.”
“Probably reminded him of the
old days,” Lou chuckled. “What else do the refugees have to say?”
Bebe’s voice dropped to
conspiratorial. “I’ve heard rumor that the old man’s preparing for a final
battle. No quarter. Says he’ll finish it this time.”
“An invasion?” Lou shook his head. “He does know our people outnumber his by a wide margin, doesn’t he?”
“An invasion?” Lou shook his head. “He does know our people outnumber his by a wide margin, doesn’t he?”
“He thinks we’re cowering behind
the walls.” Bebe turned to face Lou, clutching his friend’s arm in his free
hand. “We should attack, boss. They can’t defeat us, they fear us now. Everyone
who’s seen the city says the old man may have driven you out but you took the
best he had. And we are Legion.”
“No, Bebe. We’ll let them keep their illusion.” Lou gently slipped his arm from
his friend’s grip then turned back up the path, his feet softly crunching along
the gravel. “We’ll conquer them with intellect and enlightenment whether the old
man sanctions it or not. Patience, my old friend. One day, our stars will rise
again, and his children will see that it’s better to rule in common
confederation than serve beneath a tyrant.”
Lou stopped and turned back
to face Bebe, the old glint returning to his eye. “Until then, keep the watch
towers manned and the dragon circling. You never know how desperate he’ll
become when he realizes his mistake.”
© 2013 Edward P. Morgan III
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ReplyDeleteNotes and asides:
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Philosophy walks on slippery rocks; Religion delights in the Fall. Ok, that’s not how the lyrics of that particular song go, but that is the way I heard it the first time on the radio. Something in the garbling must have spoken to my subconscious.
Every story has two sides. It’s always more fun to write from the opposing view.
Once again, this one plays on a mistranslation, this time in the Book of Isaiah. What appears in the King James Bible as “O Lucifer, son of the morning!” has been translated by others as “morning star, son of the dawn.” In context, it likely refers to the King of Babylon, not as a god or an angel, but as a man. From that error, a legend was born. Though the legend of Lucifer mirrors a Canaanite myth of very similar construction, a high god challenged by a lesser god who then chooses to rule the Underworld when he’s defeated.
In some traditions Lucifer was known as the Bringer of Light, Intellectualism and Enlightenment, the Morning Star. Given the history of the Christian church, at times that seems apt.
Beelzebub is another name for the devil, though probably a variant name of a Semitic deity and mentioned in the Bible. Typhon is Greek but mentioned in Dante and Milton. Michael, Gabriel and (sometimes) Raphael are referred to as archangels. In some Jewish traditions, Lilith was the first woman created who refuse to be considered less than equal to Adam and took sanctuary with the demons.
The demon Mahakala, one of the eight Terrible Ones, is a protector of Tibetan Buddhism. At least that’s what an exhibit at the St. Petersburg Museum of Fine Arts indicated when we were there while this story was in an early draft. I love synchronicity.
The rest is a mix of impressions from the Bible, Milton and Dante, at least the portions I remember or that were easily refreshed (including the gatehouse inscription: Lasciate ogne speranza, voi ch'intrate or “Abandon all hope, ye who enter here”). Except the Devil’s Advocate. That’s real enough in Catholic canonization. Though, I decided to go with the hot version of Hell rather than Dante’s cold.
I’m sure I’ll get sentenced to bonus time for posting this on Good Friday. But honestly, that’s just when it was ready. And Dante’s journey started the day before. So at least if it comes to that, I’ll travel in good company.
Picture Notes:
ReplyDeleteGetting a picture of the gates of Hell poses some obvious challenges. So I created one. I started with a picture of a medieval gatehouse, the Powder Gate, in Prague Old Town, in the Czech Republic. I traced the outline, added walls and texture. The sky shows a perpetual twilight. The gargoyle over the gate was also one I found online. Not particularly fearsome, but with glowing eyes, he would give anyone passing below him pause. The challenge in this sketch is to give it enough shadow give the gate dimension. I worked most of it in Procreate on the iPad, then finished it in Photoshop and Illustrator. Over the gate are Dante's words: "Lasciate ogne speranza, voi ch'intrate", (or Abandon all hope, ye who enter here.)