“What can I get you today?”
the barista asked as Dora approached the counter. He was cute in a tall,
rugged, bearded sort of way.
She cocked her head as she
looked up at the menu board and pursed her lips. She was in the mood for
something decadent though she knew she should just order chai tea. But what was
the point of playing hooky from work if it wasn’t to do something naughty. “I’ll
have a tall mocha latte.”
“Whipped cream?” he asked as
he pulled a cup from the stack beside him.
“I can never pass it up.” She
flashed him her best smile. She could really use a treat and he looked
perfectly delicious.
“What’s the name on that?” he
asked, a black Sharpie poised for writing.
“Dora.” She accentuated the O
and R, once again pursing her lips as if she was blowing him a kiss. He didn’t
seem to notice even though he looked her in the face. Maybe that was the
problem.
“What else can I get you,
Dora?” He was ever attentive in a way most men so rarely were.
She leaned over, allowing her
gold chain to sway a moment as she eyed the confections at the top of the
pastry case, one finger pressed to her bottom lip. She was tempted by a
chocolate cheesecake square. “That Ecstasy bar looks lonely?” She tapped the
glass with a lacquered fingernail. The charms on her namesake bracelet flashed
in the artificial light. “What do you think?”
“I just made those this
morning.” His eyes never strayed despite all the enticements she offered. “They’re
always the first to disappear.”
Well, if she couldn’t have
him, she’d just have to settle for something sweet while she waited. Evy was
always late. She straightened. “You convinced me. I’ll take it.”
He retrieved the pastry and
set a fork beside it on the plate, exchanging it for her credit card. “We’ll
call your name when your drink is ready.”
Dora sashayed toward the end
of the purple, overstuffed bench lining one wall behind a row of tables, each
with a hard-backed chair opposite. The silver linen shirt of her business suit
swished against her bare legs as her heels clicked across the faux stone
floor. She cast a final coquettish glance over her shoulder. His attention was
already fixed on the next customer.
Setting the plate on the
table to claim her spot, she retrieved a couple paper napkins and a coffee stir,
pausing to study the bulletin board behind the milk and sugar station. Nothing
new or interesting there, just another yoga class she might check out. It
seemed pilates had fallen out of favor. As she turned away, another barista
called her name. She returned to the counter to scoop up her drink then wended
her way back to the corner through the scattered tables.
She set her cup beside the
plate in front of her, slipped off her shoes and curled her legs beneath her on
the velveteen bench. Glorious sun streamed through the windows behind her.
Finally, a perfect late spring day. Just a touch too warm to sit outside. That
and the patio was way too close to the well-trafficked road anyway. She had no
desire to go back to the office smelling like bus diesel, and no desire to
shout to be heard.
Dora cut a bite from her confectionary
square with the side of her fork. Luxurious chocolate and creamy cheesecake
melted in her mouth. She popped the sipping lid from her mocha latte and swirled
it with the coffee stir. She licked the stick afterwards letting the rough,
chocolate soaked wood linger in her mouth a moment before she pulled it from
between her lips. This was what missing work was all about.
She studied one of the art
prints on the cafĂ© walls. Thomas Cole’s Garden of Eden. It wasn’t quite his
Journey of Life series but it still captivated her like so many Hudson River School landscapes. Perhaps because they captured the romantic
fantasy of peaceful natural coexistence in a way well beyond her experience. And
the humans were so small, almost insignificant. Nothing like her tradition
where the people were all larger than life and foremost in the eyes of heaven. More
like Evy’s.
Where was she anyway?
Dora slipped the lid back on
her mocha latte then dug out her compact. She checked her perfectly coifed French
braid in the mirror then touched up her lipstick, a burnt crimson that
accentuated her Aegean eyes, auburn hair and alabaster skin. As she snapped the
case closed, she decided she should make a quick check of emails so pulled her
tablet from her bag. She was still brushing a finger idly through the menus when
Evy slumped into the chair across from her.
“Sorry I’m late,” her friend
said. She set a plate with a slice of banana-walnut bread on the table then
hooked her purse over the back of the blond wood chair. “We had a little
timeout in the car on the way to soccer practice.”
Dora dropped her tablet back
in her bag. Turning to her friend, she asked, “How are those boys of yours?
They must be getting big by now.”
“They're still a handful.” Evy
blew the stray strands of dirty blond hair that had wormed their way loose from
her ponytail away from her eyes before brushing them back behind an ear. “They’ve
hit the sibling rivalry stage with a vengeance. I swear those two will be the
death of me. If they don’t kill each other first.”
“I envy you your kids. I
don't think I'll ever find the right man.” Dora cast a long look back at the
counter. Her barista was coming off shift. He had just removed his apron and
was now hugging a petite, Filipino man. They strolled out arm in arm. Well,
that explained it. Sigh.
“It's not all it's cracked up
to be.” Evy took a sip from her coffee and scowled. “I swear someone put 2% in
with the soy milk again. I bet this Italian roast isn’t even fair trade
organic. Oh, I’d better get out the phone in case he calls.” She set her cup
down and started digging through her purse. “He thinks I'm running errands.”
“He’s still checking up on
you?” Dora shook her head. “It’s not right. You should say something.”
“He’s gotten much better.” Evy
smiled apologetically as she set a smart phone on the table between them. “You
should have seen him before we had to move. He barely let me out of his sight.”
“My ex was the same way.”
Dora took another bite of the Ecstasy bar. Heavenly. “Did I ever tell you he wouldn’t
let me buy any clothes?”
Evy’s eyes grew wide. “Did he
expect you to run around naked?”
“Seemed like it for the first
bunch of years.” Dora smiled wickedly.
“My husband was the same way.
Like I wasn't going to notice.” Evy rolled her eyes.
“What’s wrong with men, anyway?”
Dora’s smile turned sympathetic as she picked up her mocha latte. “I think I
should just give up on them.”
“You aren’t missing anything,
trust me.” Evy broke off and nibbled a corner of her banana-walnut bread. “You
know he still blames me for getting kicked out by his boss. Ever since that
thing with the tree in the backyard, he has no curiosity. No drive. He thinks
coming up with a name for the dog is a major accomplishment. And he didn’t even
care I might have been bitten by a snake.”
“An apple a day, right?” Dora
raised an eyebrow, still smiling, her sea blue eyes twinkling mischievously.
“Did I tell you I caught him
texting his old girlfriend, Lilith?” Evy blew across her coffee to cool it. “God
love her, but that woman is a demon.”
“Oh, I don’t know,” Dora took
another sip from her cup. “Everything you’ve said about her reminds me a little
bit of me.”
“Oh, no,” Evy protested. “You’re
beautiful and gifted. You run your own company.”
“I run someone else’s
company,” Dora corrected. “And you’re just as pretty as me.”
Evy didn’t seem to notice. “Lilith’s
just a slut.”
“Why do you put up with him?”
Dora asked, guiding the subject back to safer waters.
Evy shrugged. “With two kids
already, what choice do I have? The boys need a father.”
Dora curled her legs a little
tighter as she wondered how her own daughter had fared over the years. One day,
she’d have to find out, hopefully before the girl got curious and turned up at
her door.
“You know what we need?” Dora
sat up. “A day at the spa. Just you and me. Then maybe a little retail therapy.”
“I don’t know,” Evy hedged. “He
doesn’t like me going out.”
Dora popped forward to the
edge of her seat. “So don’t tell him. Say you’re visiting your sick sister.”
“I’m an only child.” Evy
looked away with downcast eyes.
“Me, too.” Dora noted with
surprise. “Tell him it’s an aunt or cousin or something.”
“I don’t have any aunts or
cousins. The boys say our family tree looks a lot like a telephone pole, not
many branches.”
Dora remained upbeat and
undeterred. “Then tell him I’m having female problems and you’re taking care of
me.”
“He doesn’t like you.” Evy
leaned in with a spreading smile.
“Then we won’t have to worry
about him dropping by,” Dora noted pleasantly, leaning in, too, until their
foreheads almost touched. Both women giggled.
Evy pulled back. Her brow
furrowed, creasing her otherwise unblemished milk-cream skin. “He can trace the
phone to find out where I am. He’s done it before.”
“We’ll leave it at the house.”
Dora countered cheerfully.
“What if he calls?” Evy bit her
lower lip. She really does have nice features, Dora thought, though they could
use a little embellishment.
“I’ll forward it to mine.” Dora
laid a hand on Evy’s arm and smiled. “Stop worrying, hon. This could be fun.
We’ll get you a makeover and a new outfit so he won’t have time to even think
of Lilith.”
“What’s wrong with this?” Evy
spread her hands down her dress. “I just picked it up this weekend.”
“Well,” Dora pursed her lips,
and eyed the green leaf print appraisingly, “You’ve got to admit it does make
you look a little like a soccer mom.”
“I am a soccer mom.” Evy
protested then broke into sudden, unrestrained tears. “I’ll always be a soccer
mom.” She hid her face behind her hands.
“Oh, honey, what’s wrong?”
Dora reached across to rub her arm. “I didn’t mean anything about your new
dress. It’s just lovely really. That A-line truly suits you.”
“I’m pregnant again,” Evy
blurted through her fingers.
“Oh… I…” Dora stammered, then
leaned in and whispered. “Have you told him, yet?”
“I was waiting for the right
moment.” Evy wept each word between sharp, shallow breaths. “Then I found those
messages. He hates the way I look, I know it. I mean look at me. I still
haven’t lost the weight I put on from the boys.”
“Oh, no, hon,” Dora cooed soothingly,
“There’s nothing wrong with the way you look.” Nothing a touch of makeup and maybe
a workout or two wouldn’t help.
“Really?” Evy sniffled. “You’re not just saying that.” She scrubbed away her tears and brushed the strays away from her eyes again.
“Really?” Evy sniffled. “You’re not just saying that.” She scrubbed away her tears and brushed the strays away from her eyes again.
“I tell you what,” Dora said,
sitting back. “There’s a yoga class starting next week at that women’s only gym
around the corner. I’m in the market for a new instructor since mine retired.
What do you say we go together? It will be just the thing.”
“What about the baby?” Evy
clutched her hands protectively over her belly, her dark honey, doe-like eyes
welling with new tears that refused to fall.
“Hon, these yoga girls know
all sorts of moves from beginner to advanced, all of them baby safe. A few
might even help you get pregnant one more time, if that’s what you really want.”
Dora smiled a knowing smile, then fetched out a handkerchief and passed it
across the table. At least she didn’t have any mascara to run.
“Here, I bought this for you
today.” Dora reached back into her bag and set a pre-wrapped blue box with a
gold ribbon before her. “I was saving it for your birthday but why wait?”
“You shouldn’t have.” Evy
eyed it with mock suspicious. “What is it?”
“Something I saw and thought
of you. Go ahead.” Dora motioned with a hand. “It won’t bite.”
Evy pulled the snug cover from
the box and set it aside. A small, lidded urn lay nested in gold tissue paper. She
held it up by one of its looped handles. Tiny black figures frolicked around
its curved terra cotta sides in a pantomimed shadow-play of a celebratory
dance.
“It’s very pretty,” Evy said.
“Is it Greek?”
Dora nodded. “Open it.
There’s something else inside.”
Evy removed the lid and hooked
her pinkie on a silken black cord within. It snaked out as she lifted it. A
flat pewter ring dangled at its end, three black words in a careful cursive
hand engraved in a circle around its surface: faith, love and hope. The cord
was looped through the pendant between faith and love, leaving hope alone and
upside down at the bottom, where someone wearing it might read it and find
inspiration.
“Oh, Dora, it’s beautiful.” Evy
held it out. Sunlight glinted off its polished surface.
“It’s pewter,” Dora said. “I
know you can’t wear anything flashy. I hope it’s ok.”
“The inscription reminds me
of a verse in 1st Corinthians,” Evy said as she admired it.
“I think that’s by design. At
least that’s what the salesgirl told me. But I think they got it wrong. She
said love should be at the bottom because it was the greatest of the three but I
moved it. Hope is more important.”
“They didn’t get it wrong,”
Evy whispered through a different kind of tears. She pushed back her chair and skirted
around the table to hug Dora. “Thanks for being my friend.” Her hair smelled
nice, a clean, fresh, floral scent though it was probably just her shampoo
rather than any expensive perfume. Dora sometimes wished she could capture such
simple innocence for herself.
“Oh my gosh, what time is it,
anyway?” Evy pulled back and checked her watch then hurriedly gathered up her things
and slung her purse over her shoulder. “I’ve got stop at the store before I pick
up the boys then get dinner ready.”
Dora smiled at her friend’s resilience.
“Think about my offer.”
“I will. We need to do this
more often.” Evy hugged her again, quickly this time. “It was good to see you,
Pandora.”
“You, too, Eve.” Dora
squeezed her back and released her. “Give my love to Adam and the boys.”
Eve paused at the glass door
to wave then scampered across the parking lot. As Pandora settled back onto the
bench to finish her dessert, she wondered just how different her life might have
been had she been born just a little farther east.
© 2013 Edward P. Morgan III
© 2013 Edward P. Morgan III
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I’ve had this one in my backlog for quite a while. I can’t remember why the idea of Pandora and Eve having coffee together struck me as amusing. They are two different yet strikingly similar myths about the creation of the first woman. Neither ends well, starting with beauty and plenty, and ending with suffering and pain. At least Pandora acted out of ignorance and without malice.
Christianity has vastly different tradition from the Greeks. If you want a good look at their take on women, check out 1 Timothy 2:9-11. Eve had at least three sons (Cane, Abel, Seth) and some number of daughters (who may or may not have married her sons).
Pandora is no man’s helpmate. From what I’ve read, she strikes me as an independent woman. In some myths she has a daughter, in others she is childless. While Eve has garnered the reputation, Pandora was given all the tools to be the real temptress.
In the Jewish tradition, Lilith was actually the first woman (made from the same earth as Adam). She refused to serve Adam as an inferior, defied God and fled to copulate with demons. Doesn’t speak well for her prospective husband.
A sixteenth century mistranslation the led to the phrase “Pandora’s box.” In the original myth, Pandora scattered the contents of a large storage jar (used for wine, oil or grain). The word can also refer to a funerary jar. That puts a new twist on it.
1 Corinthians 13:13 “And now faith, hope, and love abide these three; but the greatest of these is love.” You can search for “hope pendant” on Amazon and find the one I patterned it after.
Oh, and I love Thomas Cole’s Journey of Life. I intermittently make the trek to the National Gallery just to see it. I like his Garden of Eden as well, though I’ve never seen it in person. The coolest part is how tiny Adam and Eve are. Almost inconsequential.
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Coffee at Starbucks. I took this on our Anniversary in 2009, inspired by a similar photo by Tim Fritz, our guest photographer for "This is a Non-Secure Line". I didn't do much to it. Leveled it a little, a little sharpening, and a little contrast. It was nice to have on hand for this story.
This one has been selected for a reading by a local actor at the Wordier Than Thou Fiction Live! event in St. Petersburg. Very cool.
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